The Battle for Everyone's Souls

EDIT BONUS! -_-
Trying to resize this and stuff.. really annoying..


EDIT FINAL: (11-6-12)
..and thus, I have finished. This is for an art trade with , by the way.
It actually came out quite well. Maybe I should charge her for it..
Except.. I made quite a few mistakes. Anyone who can correctly identify all my mistakes will get a free request! In color, too! I'll tell you right now, though, Magolor soul's right hand (on my right) really, really sucks. -_-
Oh and planet popstar. It looks like someone chained it up and made it bleed. It could be a mistake, but maybe.. duh duh duh! It's not!

EDIT TRI: (10-20-12)
-Inked everything, except the planet popstar in the background.
-Edited my 'signature'. I'm trying to come up with a good catchphrase. It's not going well.. -_-
Kinda left in some pencil marks to remind me where I'm supposed to color. First time drawing DeDeDe by the way. I think he came out.. okay.
I left planet popstar the way it is since I'm not sure if it looks good the way it is now. I need feedback.. T_T

EDIT DEUX: (10-06-12)
-Penciled in Landia and Magolor (the nice one).
-Fixed Bandanna Dee.
-Put detail into Magolor Soul's wings. Funny how I created a paradox just now by putting both Magolors.
-Cleaned up in general.
-Oh look, there's Planet Popstar..
Well, what have we here? Kirby is determined to beat Magolor Soul into oblivion, protect his precious snacks, and get home by lunch/dinnertime. DeDeDe is noticably cross since he has to put his schemes on hold for the sake of the planet. Kings should not be trifling with such trivial matters! Bandanna Dee got dragged into saving the world by Master DDD (as he always is). And finally, Meta Knight is there just to supervise since he is the only level-headed adult in Dreamland. Yeah, let's go with that..
Is it just me, or does Landia look like he belongs in a Spyro game? No? Well, anyhoo, he looks a lot like a bird of some sorts as well. Must be the mouth. hm. :I

EDIT 1: (9-28-12)
-Put detai into Magolor Soul. Looks more like the creepy eye-for-a-mouth villain than a pencil scribble.
-Outlined the swords and Triple D's hammer.
-Kirby's hat is edited slightly.
Augh, Bandanna Dee is just floating there off to the side.. and he will still be floating there until I can put him in a better pose.. Never really liked Bandanna Dee anyway..